I really like the questions you pose at the end of your piece. They seem abstract enough to add something new in the research scene but also very focused.

Your topic is really interesting and I think your appreciation of the research shows in your post. What kind of research questions can you develop out of this topic?

I enjoyed reading your summary and I think it’s quite thorough. Next time, make sure to check for grammatical errors, but other than that, well done.

Your elaboration on the author’s points is very focused and clear. I also liked your connection from this piece to another modern event.

I like your response to the author’s questioning nature. You may want to include more of a reaction to the summary rather than just a summary itself.

I like the way that you are straight to the point about what Cronon believes and what he would say about your object. The direction of your essay is clear and your examples and quotes are relevant to your topic.

Your connection to your essay is very precise and descriptive and allows the audience to understand what you’re illustrating. You also cited direct examples from the text well but may be missing a few connections […]

Cronon’s argumentative points are made very clear in your response. Though the first few sentences may need some grammatical editing, the transitioning in your paragraphs is clear and precise.

The use of quotes throughout your piece is coherent and allows you to effectively support what Haraway’s main argument is. Additionally, your ideas remain objective and intuitive, well done.