English @ SUNY Geneseo | Justin D'Souza | Activity https://sunygeneseoenglish.org/members/justind/activity/ Activity feed for Justin D'Souza. Sat, 03 Oct 2026 17:37:46 -0500 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 0729302f8cfe49393b1f8e769b9b3900 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, The Physiological Benefits of Singing, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/11/02/the-physiological-benefits-of-singing-2/#comment-133 Wed, 02 Nov 2016 16:32:14 -0500 I like how your questions bring the knowledge from the article and consider how it could be applied to other scenarios. I think that this may be good to research as literature on such topics such as singing and […]

]]> 974886f1d6069d1ba2f3245ad68bd054 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, "Whisper of the Wild" Response, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/10/31/whisper-of-the-wild-response-4/#comment-123 Mon, 31 Oct 2016 16:57:48 -0500 I can relate to your desire to see the sky without light pollution. I often take long exposure photos of the stars with the hope of capturing the intricate star bands of the milky way, but unfortunately the glow […]

]]> 1a176d53a8c061a0d35efaf0507f39b6 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, Response to "Land Divided, Coast United", on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/10/25/response-to-land-divided-coast-united/#comment-109 Wed, 26 Oct 2016 14:57:06 -0500 Good connection between the article and your own life with Lake Ontario. I wonder, if you choose to write your essay on the topic of pollution, if you could use the Lake as a focus. You could compare and contrast […]

]]> 04642620b4d2c23bea1d281eae583d35 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, Thoughts on "The Clan of One Breasted Women", on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/10/24/thoughts-on-the-clan-of-one-breasted-women/#comment-100 Mon, 24 Oct 2016 19:12:13 -0500 You did a nice job of not only summarizing Williams’ points, but also injecting your own thoughts and opinions into the piece. The distinction you made regarding how nuclear experiments have both good and bad […]

]]> d1977881aa9b89eb3c2047c2e1fc0755 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, Making Science Writing Relevant to the Public, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/10/17/making-science-writing-relevant-to-the-public/#comment-94 Mon, 17 Oct 2016 19:09:21 -0500 I enjoyed the structure of your post. You do not merely summarize but make claims on the techniques the author uses to make their writing stand out and support these with evidence from the article.

Nice job […]

]]> 6f526f0bdab57ad4dd01ccfd85cac908 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, Recognizing the Skeptics, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/28/recognizing-the-skeptics/#comment-83 Wed, 28 Sep 2016 15:26:57 -0500 Nice job explaining the “so what” of your essay. I agree that many students would fall in the category of “who really cares about the Ivy” so it’s good that you’ve taken the time to address this section of your […]

]]> 02a2bdd4fe3e325ba295d051c802ae85 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, William Cronan and Seuss Spruce Graff & Berkenstein Arguments, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/20/william-cronan-and-seuss-spruce-graff-berkenstein-arguments/#comment-45 Tue, 20 Sep 2016 21:02:23 -0500 I like your argument and how you are adding new examples that can support Cronon’s thoughts. Your example about the benches around the tree and how it supports the idea that one can experience wilderness anywhere […]

]]> 4140df68ac842156e54087cb236cab26 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, We Have Never Been Modern summary, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/13/we-have-never-been-modern-summary/#comment-36 Wed, 14 Sep 2016 12:43:26 -0500 Interesting thoughts about hybrids. I think certainly modern society does not like the idea of a hybrid as it shatters the neat boxes that we try to group issues in. However, the complex issues that meld science, […]

]]> e5a224b3aab4b12573044b99db7f7134 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, We Have Never Been Modern summary, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/13/we-have-never-been-modern-summary/#comment-30 Tue, 13 Sep 2016 22:28:59 -0500 Interesting thoughts about hybrids. I think certainly modern society does not like the idea of a hybrid as it shatters the neat boxes that we try to group issues in. However, the complex issues that meld science, […]

]]> e44356a696b1a652c6d5ba28ac2f8886 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, Nature Isn't "Natural", on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/11/nature-isnt-natural/#comment-24 Mon, 12 Sep 2016 15:45:59 -0500 Clear, concise explanation of how Romanticism altered how one perceives the wilderness around them. Nice job!
The ivy on Sturges brings up a question for me. Are humans intentionally covering the building with […]

]]> 82683b22290376738543b6b9f78c1202 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, The Cyborg Manifesto, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/07/the-cyborg-manifesto-3/#comment-11 Wed, 07 Sep 2016 18:44:58 -0500 Interesting ideas about how your rock conflicts with Haraway’s theory. I would say that Haraway tries to convey that modern technology blurs the boundary — but that does not mean the boundary ceases to exist. I […]

]]> 4eb18229c2637d3f82b8d6245fec6030 Justin D'Souza commented on the post, Blog Post "They Say" Mike Emanuele, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/08/30/blog-post-they-say-mike-emanuele/#comment-6 Thu, 01 Sep 2016 17:14:56 -0500 I know you said you may edit this, so I figured I’d leave a comment with some suggestions on embedding an argument into it. For some “they say” versus “I say,” consider that many students see the tree as a campus […]

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