English @ SUNY Geneseo | Erik Buckingham | Activity https://sunygeneseoenglish.org/members/erikbuckingham/activity/ Activity feed for Erik Buckingham. Sat, 03 Oct 2026 17:37:46 -0500 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 33fb308621071272a7e805e644dceaca Erik Buckingham commented on the post, Thoughts on "Postcards From the Edge of Consciousness", on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/11/01/thoughts-on-postcards-from-the-edge-of-consciousness/#comment-126 Wed, 02 Nov 2016 14:21:34 -0500 I liked how you included the fact that athletes use sensory deprivation. It related the topic better to the real world and showed how valuable sensory deprivation can be.

]]> 506dcf91629524f8e089ea9d1e138047 Erik Buckingham commented on the post, Water: A Basic Human Need Regardless of Culture, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/10/25/water-a-basic-human-need-regardless-of-culture/#comment-107 Wed, 26 Oct 2016 00:41:23 -0500 I really liked how you started your post with a strong fact like that it is undeniable that all humans need water. I think that you can state your opinions without using “I” so much, and I was able to get what […]

]]> 8da1e84d4a2f3dde312bbe89a3d6c874 Erik Buckingham commented on the post, CLAN OF THE ONE BREASTED WOMEN, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/10/24/caln-of-the-one-breasted-women/#comment-104 Tue, 25 Oct 2016 02:37:29 -0500 I thought your analysis of how the government responded to Tempest was very good

]]> 7ed7d21df97b6e6fbd56ef1b89440529 Erik Buckingham commented on the post, , on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/26/519/#comment-80 Tue, 27 Sep 2016 16:19:44 -0500 Great job introducing a third party! Your last sentence wraps up your essay very well by the way.

]]> d433217fbe2cfe339385d78be073051a Erik Buckingham commented on the post, Bruno Latour on The Greek Tree, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/21/bruno-latour-on-the-greek-tree/#comment-63 Thu, 22 Sep 2016 14:49:30 -0500 I really like how you gave us Bruno Latour’s point of view at the very beginning of the writing. The only thing that was wondering was your point of view on it. You had the “they say” but I didn’t understand wha […]

]]> 6e52febb807e535b39983e4377c30205 Erik Buckingham commented on the post, "We Have Never Been Modern", on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/14/we-have-never-been-modern-4/#comment-44 Tue, 20 Sep 2016 00:06:54 -0500 You chose a great quote and kept the summary concise! Just don’t forget about the they say, I say. In the beginning, you could say something along the lines of “many people cloud their judgement by allowing their […]

]]> c0223b6e06ef8002f7c65b40f3392c2f Erik Buckingham commented on the post, Cooke, "The Cyborg Manifesto", on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/07/cooke-the-cyborg-manifesto-response/#comment-14 Thu, 08 Sep 2016 01:24:07 -0500 I thought that you related your object to Haraway’s message very well.

]]> ac8531a7cbc0e41a4eed71bfaf964db3 Erik Buckingham commented on the post, My Response, on the site Neuwrite/Edu http://neuwrite.sunygeneseoenglish.org/2016/09/07/my-response/#comment-13 Thu, 08 Sep 2016 01:21:33 -0500 Overall, I thought this was written very well! The sentence, “She believes gender, social, race, and historical constitution cannot be the basis for unity, nothing about being a female binds to ‘women'” did a […]

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